Thursday, November 12, 2009

HW # 31:"baby back ribs"

A song that remind's me of a time is when I always go fishing with my uncle. He always a song called "baby back ribs." He loves that song. Theres not one day hes not siging that song. Thats his lucky song . "Baby back ribs" is lucky song because he caught a big blue fish. The big blue fish was taller than me. He was so happy. a week after we ate the big blue
fish.

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TO BAD FOR U said...

who sing this song baby back ribs

Kevyn Delacoudray said...

lol jayquon la la la la la la la la (elmo theme)

Kevyn Delacoudray said...

yo that party was crazy me and justin WON!!!!!!!!

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